
Did you know what it felt like?
What you did to me?
That stupid promise.
The promise I thought would last forever.
Liar.
You lied to me.
The weight that I have felt because of my stupidity.
I thought the promise would be real.
No, you’ve left me here to die.
You’ve left it all to nothing.
Let us all fall back into dust.
These walls are still crumbling in upon us,
And I wait for you to return,
I want you to be safe.
Liar.
I find myself, crushed beneath the walls of old friendship,
As you walk upon them,
My body falls to the dust beneath the walls.
You face me,
But your face is no longer full of love,
But hate and deception.
I found my way back to a day where I had happiness,
So long ago before you started to control me.
Even before the promise that you’d be there forever.
I should just get over it,
That’s what everyone says,
But right now I can’t.
I don’t care anymore.
Liar.
All I feel is emptiness,
I fade to nothing beneath your feet.
And you feel nothing.
29 comments:
Salam ziarah...
Bersabarlah wahai teman... dalam dugaan, pasti ada hikmah disebaliknya.. May Allah always be with you.. both of you..
Nway.. sekadar pesanan., lebih baik jangan buat sesuatu perjanjian itu jika anta rasa xmampu dan susah untuk tunaikan.. fikir dahulu sblum bertindak.. ingat, sekadar pesanan sahaja...
salam...
ana pon rase terpanggil untuk ingatkan anta sikit.. erw, hidup nie mmg selalu sangat ade ujian/dugaan.. tp, mmg dah jadik tanggungjawab kite sebagai manusia untuk sabar dengan dugaan tuh dan berusaha untuk memperbaikinya..
firman Allah: "dan tidak aku ciptakan jin dan manusia melainkan untuk beribadah kepadaku"
and it is a need for u to know that juz by being patient and 'redha' with Allah faith, u had already done a good deed...
so, try not to express ur hatred and anger in this blog.. ok?? instead, how bout using ur blog as a medium to express ur luv to Allah..
insyaallah, that is all,.,.,
~SALAM~
firman Allah :"Aku tidak menciptakan jin dan manusia melainkan untuk mengabdikan diri kepadaku" (Surah azzariat 51:56-57)
I dont want to be soo mean.. Just trying to 'recorrect' ur statement xDD.. Ok, first we dont express our hatred nor anger in this blog.. Its just a Poem for others to read.. We just want to remind them all about 'promise'.. The 'dark-side' of promise..
Thanks for the comment by the way! Good luck in ur day..
remembrance on the important of 'promise'.. erm, maybe i had a wrong first impression about this poem.. so, i'm sorry,.,
~by the way, tq for ur correction (particularly on the "firman")
~salam~
Salam.. Its ok 'ingatan'.. Who are u really is? Too curios to be true xDD.. Man, ure true muslim/muslimah..
-Hologram
nih saper yang bwat ek.....
okeyhlah...
bestlah poem nih..
boleh dapat a+ nih...
erw.. a muslim.. yerp, a muslim,, that is who i am.. by the way, judging from the way u think and handle sumthing.. i really do think that u'll be a great "masyab"..
so, gud luck in handling ur 'amanah' as a masyab next year..
*bout who i really am.,., u'll know about it when the time comes,.,.
~SALAM~
Ni sape yg bwat? Klu nta nk taw sape y gbuat.. Tgk kt sblah title die ade tulis..
contoh: H.A.Z.i.Q by hologram..
tu bermaksud ana yg buat xDD.. Klu
contoh: H.A.Z.I.Q bt Pol..
tu sedare ana yg buat.. In this case, ana n sedara ana..
-HOLOGRAM
Salam.. Thanks again 'ingatan'.. I will try my best to handle my 'amanah' as good as a true leader.. Asek cakap bi je xDD.. So, please tegur ana klu ana tersalah gune kuasa ana, maklumlah ni first time pegang jawatan tinggi.. Dahlah tibe2 je tros tinggi.. Tolong tegur ana kay? Klu ana marah.. Cakap la ana yg suroh xDD.. Then i will know who u are! Huhu..
N.. Give me one chance.. Ni Fahrul bukan?
-HOLOGRAM
erw,., ntahla... papepon, salam ukhwah.....
p/s: sorry asik gune BI sblom nie..
hahahahahah
Salam.. Dont get me wrong xD.. Say 'yes'.. Haha! Xpe2 xkesah, ana pon tergune bi jgak sbb nta gne bi..
-HOLOGRAM
nak ana ngaku ke?.. tp, ana bukan fahrul lah.. fahrul tuh sape?..
ana=ntahla.....
Salam.. Ok2, xkesah la sape2 pon.. Tp yg peting, thanks for your comments..
-HOLOGRAM
.........
nk speaking cam korang ana x reti.....
kalo tulis rumi boleh jer jadi...
tapi tahniah diucapkan kepade masyab tahun ni(tahun depan skali xDD)
may Allah bless you~
x baek ah rasenye tipu2 nie,., klah,., nie fahrul,.,
~gud luck pekse,.,~
~salam~
Salam.. Huh? Tahniah apenye? Suhail? Are u ok? Sakit rasenye bdak ni
-HOLOGRAM
Salam.. Haha! Gotcha! Fahrul2.. Power guk en Bi nta? Hebat2..
-HOLOGRAM
wooohoo..~!! fahrul mmg gile bi sjak kbelakangan nih.die kn... tp nazran pn hebat gak~!! ana je mundur bi..tp respect gile spe debate eng..k. salam.. :] :]
to the s/u kehormat 1 batch 17,
firstly, congratz because u had been cheated (kot) by fahrul...
second, i just want u to sedar diri dan gilap kebolehan ur ability.(jwtn uh)..
thirdly, adakah NAZRAN SENGAL??? YA!!
Salam.. Pergh! Segannye rase tibe senior2 comment ana pnye post or blog xDD.. Terutama kak azah la, haha! Debate Bi?! Haha! Ana xde minat dlam debate2 ni.. Tp klu tgk org debate, ok la jgak.. Tgk adek(muaz) ana debate! Besh2! Cakap penuh perasaan..
Salam.. Ammar! Knape calonkan ana s/u batch?! Ramai lagi yg lagi layak.. Serious ana ckp.. Xde org lain ke.. Klu calon je ok la.. Ni sume org amek ana! Tgk! Kne jadi S/u plak.. Adakah AMMAR lagi SENGAL??
-HOLOGRAM
Pol 'n' Hologram said...
Adakah AMMAR sengal? Say 'yes' to AMMAR!
-HOLOGRAM
October 24, 2008 8:48 AM
ADAKAH NAZRAN GEDIK?? SAY 'YES!' to NAZRAN SENGAL!
Haha! Mane boleh! Say 'No' to nazran.. Am i right? xDD
-HOLOGRAM
ape punyer TIMB PRES n SU lah.. gaduh xbertempat.. haha.. :p
erw,., lame x vist blog nie,., hahaha,.,
*tgh pekse yer?? hahaha,., kami dah bebas,., papepon, harap2 sume akhi2 f2 buatlah sebaik mungkin yer untuk pekse akhir taun nie,., bg result gempak punyer,.,
~salam
haha... thanks abg naz... kalau debat mmg kena feeling...
Salam.. For your information, F4 dah start la exam.. Tp F2 n F1 this Thursday maybe.. InsyaAllah, kami semua akan lakukan terbaik..
Salam.. Haha! Tp muaz mmg ade bakat.. Power la die debate.. Hebat hebat! Xnk try debate bi plak? Try la! Give em your best shot! Klu nta debate Bi, ana mmg tabik la
Salam.. Haha! Ala.. Ni sume Ammar la start xDD.. Die gedik sgt, haha!
GEDIK + SENGAL = AMMAR! Yeay! Nanti kite tgk poll.. Sape paling tinggi kay?
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