CLICK HERE FOR BLOGGER TEMPLATES AND MYSPACE LAYOUTS »

Thursday, October 16, 2008

Liar! Liar! Liar!






Did you know what it felt like?
What you did to me?
That stupid promise.
The promise I thought would last forever.

Liar.

You lied to me.
The weight that I have felt because of my stupidity.
I thought the promise would be real.

No, you’ve left me here to die.
You’ve left it all to nothing.
Let us all fall back into dust.

These walls are still crumbling in upon us,
And I wait for you to return,
I want you to be safe.

Liar.

I find myself, crushed beneath the walls of old friendship,
As you walk upon them,
My body falls to the dust beneath the walls.

You face me,
But your face is no longer full of love,
But hate and deception.

I found my way back to a day where I had happiness,
So long ago before you started to control me.
Even before the promise that you’d be there forever.

I should just get over it,
That’s what everyone says,
But right now I can’t.
I don’t care anymore.

Liar.

All I feel is emptiness,
I fade to nothing beneath your feet.
And you feel nothing.

29 comments:

Anonymous said...

Salam ziarah...
Bersabarlah wahai teman... dalam dugaan, pasti ada hikmah disebaliknya.. May Allah always be with you.. both of you..

Nway.. sekadar pesanan., lebih baik jangan buat sesuatu perjanjian itu jika anta rasa xmampu dan susah untuk tunaikan.. fikir dahulu sblum bertindak.. ingat, sekadar pesanan sahaja...
salam...

Anonymous said...

ana pon rase terpanggil untuk ingatkan anta sikit.. erw, hidup nie mmg selalu sangat ade ujian/dugaan.. tp, mmg dah jadik tanggungjawab kite sebagai manusia untuk sabar dengan dugaan tuh dan berusaha untuk memperbaikinya..

firman Allah: "dan tidak aku ciptakan jin dan manusia melainkan untuk beribadah kepadaku"

and it is a need for u to know that juz by being patient and 'redha' with Allah faith, u had already done a good deed...

so, try not to express ur hatred and anger in this blog.. ok?? instead, how bout using ur blog as a medium to express ur luv to Allah..

insyaallah, that is all,.,.,

~SALAM~

Anonymous said...

firman Allah :"Aku tidak menciptakan jin dan manusia melainkan untuk mengabdikan diri kepadaku" (Surah azzariat 51:56-57)

I dont want to be soo mean.. Just trying to 'recorrect' ur statement xDD.. Ok, first we dont express our hatred nor anger in this blog.. Its just a Poem for others to read.. We just want to remind them all about 'promise'.. The 'dark-side' of promise..

Thanks for the comment by the way! Good luck in ur day..

Anonymous said...

remembrance on the important of 'promise'.. erm, maybe i had a wrong first impression about this poem.. so, i'm sorry,.,

~by the way, tq for ur correction (particularly on the "firman")

~salam~

Anonymous said...

Salam.. Its ok 'ingatan'.. Who are u really is? Too curios to be true xDD.. Man, ure true muslim/muslimah..

-Hologram

Akio uRiku said...

nih saper yang bwat ek.....
okeyhlah...
bestlah poem nih..
boleh dapat a+ nih...

Anonymous said...

erw.. a muslim.. yerp, a muslim,, that is who i am.. by the way, judging from the way u think and handle sumthing.. i really do think that u'll be a great "masyab"..

so, gud luck in handling ur 'amanah' as a masyab next year..

*bout who i really am.,., u'll know about it when the time comes,.,.

~SALAM~

Anonymous said...

Ni sape yg bwat? Klu nta nk taw sape y gbuat.. Tgk kt sblah title die ade tulis..
contoh: H.A.Z.i.Q by hologram..
tu bermaksud ana yg buat xDD.. Klu
contoh: H.A.Z.I.Q bt Pol..
tu sedare ana yg buat.. In this case, ana n sedara ana..

-HOLOGRAM

Anonymous said...

Salam.. Thanks again 'ingatan'.. I will try my best to handle my 'amanah' as good as a true leader.. Asek cakap bi je xDD.. So, please tegur ana klu ana tersalah gune kuasa ana, maklumlah ni first time pegang jawatan tinggi.. Dahlah tibe2 je tros tinggi.. Tolong tegur ana kay? Klu ana marah.. Cakap la ana yg suroh xDD.. Then i will know who u are! Huhu..

N.. Give me one chance.. Ni Fahrul bukan?

-HOLOGRAM

Anonymous said...

erw,., ntahla... papepon, salam ukhwah.....

p/s: sorry asik gune BI sblom nie..

hahahahahah

Anonymous said...

Salam.. Dont get me wrong xD.. Say 'yes'.. Haha! Xpe2 xkesah, ana pon tergune bi jgak sbb nta gne bi..

-HOLOGRAM

Anonymous said...

nak ana ngaku ke?.. tp, ana bukan fahrul lah.. fahrul tuh sape?..

ana=ntahla.....

Anonymous said...

Salam.. Ok2, xkesah la sape2 pon.. Tp yg peting, thanks for your comments..

-HOLOGRAM

Suhail Shirajuddin said...

.........
nk speaking cam korang ana x reti.....
kalo tulis rumi boleh jer jadi...
tapi tahniah diucapkan kepade masyab tahun ni(tahun depan skali xDD)

may Allah bless you~

Anonymous said...

x baek ah rasenye tipu2 nie,., klah,., nie fahrul,.,

~gud luck pekse,.,~

~salam~

Anonymous said...

Salam.. Huh? Tahniah apenye? Suhail? Are u ok? Sakit rasenye bdak ni

-HOLOGRAM

Anonymous said...

Salam.. Haha! Gotcha! Fahrul2.. Power guk en Bi nta? Hebat2..

-HOLOGRAM

A lady said...

wooohoo..~!! fahrul mmg gile bi sjak kbelakangan nih.die kn... tp nazran pn hebat gak~!! ana je mundur bi..tp respect gile spe debate eng..k. salam.. :] :]

'Ammar Khalil said...

to the s/u kehormat 1 batch 17,
firstly, congratz because u had been cheated (kot) by fahrul...
second, i just want u to sedar diri dan gilap kebolehan ur ability.(jwtn uh)..
thirdly, adakah NAZRAN SENGAL??? YA!!

Pol 'n' Hologram said...

Salam.. Pergh! Segannye rase tibe senior2 comment ana pnye post or blog xDD.. Terutama kak azah la, haha! Debate Bi?! Haha! Ana xde minat dlam debate2 ni.. Tp klu tgk org debate, ok la jgak.. Tgk adek(muaz) ana debate! Besh2! Cakap penuh perasaan..

Pol 'n' Hologram said...

Salam.. Ammar! Knape calonkan ana s/u batch?! Ramai lagi yg lagi layak.. Serious ana ckp.. Xde org lain ke.. Klu calon je ok la.. Ni sume org amek ana! Tgk! Kne jadi S/u plak.. Adakah AMMAR lagi SENGAL??

-HOLOGRAM

'Ammar Khalil said...

Pol 'n' Hologram said...
Adakah AMMAR sengal? Say 'yes' to AMMAR!
-HOLOGRAM
October 24, 2008 8:48 AM


ADAKAH NAZRAN GEDIK?? SAY 'YES!' to NAZRAN SENGAL!

Pol 'n' Hologram said...

Haha! Mane boleh! Say 'No' to nazran.. Am i right? xDD

-HOLOGRAM

Anonymous said...

ape punyer TIMB PRES n SU lah.. gaduh xbertempat.. haha.. :p

Mohd Fahrulradzi said...

erw,., lame x vist blog nie,., hahaha,.,

*tgh pekse yer?? hahaha,., kami dah bebas,., papepon, harap2 sume akhi2 f2 buatlah sebaik mungkin yer untuk pekse akhir taun nie,., bg result gempak punyer,.,

~salam

Muhammad Mu'az said...

haha... thanks abg naz... kalau debat mmg kena feeling...

Pol 'n' Hologram said...

Salam.. For your information, F4 dah start la exam.. Tp F2 n F1 this Thursday maybe.. InsyaAllah, kami semua akan lakukan terbaik..

Pol 'n' Hologram said...

Salam.. Haha! Tp muaz mmg ade bakat.. Power la die debate.. Hebat hebat! Xnk try debate bi plak? Try la! Give em your best shot! Klu nta debate Bi, ana mmg tabik la

Pol 'n' Hologram said...

Salam.. Haha! Ala.. Ni sume Ammar la start xDD.. Die gedik sgt, haha!
GEDIK + SENGAL = AMMAR! Yeay! Nanti kite tgk poll.. Sape paling tinggi kay?