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Monday, October 20, 2008

Engulfed

Chapter 1: Escape

He sat in the corner, staring in space. Flashes of memory wove in and out his mind. Bitter memories that was etched deep inside his mind. Memories about past events that changed his life. He vowed to move on, but never really accomplished it. Sighing deeply, he raised himself from the chair and surveyed his room. It was a small room in a crummy apartment. It was all he could afford. A table and chair beside the bed and the chair he had previously vacated in the corner facing the door. So many things had happen in this room. It was where it all started. Where all this madness began. Madness...

Madness?

Was his own decisions and actions madness? From anyone's point of view, the answer would be yes. But he thinks himself as a reasonable and sane person. Lots of people would've died if he didn't take actions. Although people did die, he managed to reduce various numbers of people dieing, but not the most important to him. His friends face flashes in his mind. Tears started to form in his eyes. Why? Why must she die? He thought.

He was brought back into reality when the door to his apartment was knocked several times. There was 2 locks on his door. 1 is a chain lock and the other is a door lock. He unlock the door but didn't remove the chain. He open the door by several inches to reveal a man in dark suit. The man flashed a badge in front of him. FBI was etched onto the badge.

"I'm an agent from the FBI. Are you Sean?" Questions the man.
"Yes I am," replied Sean. He bit back a polite question in case the FBI agent takes advantage.
"We're here to question you about the murder of Evelyn Riley dated ten October," said the agent.
"May I come in?" As he asked, he looked sideways quickly.

Sean being a clever and instinctive guy said, "Sure, come in". He closed the door and made to pull the chains, he unlocks it slowly. Taking his time to think. "This damn bolts are kind of rusty. Takes time to pull." He addressed the agent. He looked around his room. There was no route for escape. Except...the window. Unluckily, Sean lives on the seventh floor of his apartment. What better way to have a classy escape from the cops? His mind thought sarcastically. He moved over to the window and looked down. He whistles, and after waiting for a few minutes, just as the door of his room was brought down by several man in bulletproof vests, he jumped.

to be continued...

18 comments:

Anonymous said...

hating the life we're living?
bersyukurlah dengan ape yang ade...

Anonymous said...

nazran!!!

minta sabar dengan kutukan kawan yg mengatkan anta ni gedik...

insyaallah anta akan mendapat pahal yg besar...

jgn balas balik

-sahabat sejati mu...

Anonymous said...

Ok...secara jujurnya. Aku agak bengang. Tajuk blog ni bukan utk tunjuk perasaan benci atau marah terhadap dunia ni. Tajuk blog ini sekadar metafora. Korg suke ke dunia yg kene exploit dgn manusia-manusia yg tamak ni? Ktorg memang bersyukur dgn ape yg ade, tetapi, ktorg tidak suke org yg tamak mengexploitasi kurniaan tuhan di dunia ni.

P.S: Apollo - is Nazran's cousin and Hologram is Nazran himself. Don't get confuse.

P.S.S: Comment sepatutnyer dituju kepada ape yg telah di post, bukan kepada tajuk atau ape2 yg tiada kene mengena dengan post. Jika anda rase msg anda itu penting, sila lah send email dkt email blog ini utk menunjukkan perasaan x puas hati atau ape2 yg x kene ngan blog ni. Kami akan reply dgn sekadar yg mampu secara jujur dan ikhlas. klu takut identity terdedah, korg buatlah spam email.

/Pol out

Pol 'n' Hologram said...

Salam.. Xdela.. Ana n Ammar saje je gurau2, huhu! Xde maksod pon nk menyakitkan hati..

-HOLOGRAM

ricemix said...

salam ziarah..hmm,bagos2..setiap kata kamu dimulakan dgn salam..truskan update..

Pol 'n' Hologram said...

Salam.. Lar, xde mase nk update blog, haha! Lagipon idea tgh kering ni + EXAM!.. Ricemix = Nadim? Thanks!

Anonymous said...

it's quite good for everything.but why it to be continued

Pol 'n' Hologram said...

Salam.. Acap2! Knape sorok? Haha! Eyh salah lol.. PANTAI! PULAU + PANTAI FOREVER

-HOLOGRAM

Anonymous said...

salam..."one does not finish a story in one chapter"

mas syarep said...

cara luahan cite ni sgt menarik..it sound like truely deep inside from ur heart..

hehe..mmg phm ar perasaan mcmtu..tp kite bole do something pd masalah tu..kita mampu mengubahnya..tidak cukup sekadar benci shj..klo bole..kita nk bende tu xjd lg pd kite..kn?

wisdom twice.......n gudluck for ur exam!!jgn fail kt hafazan lg..kang kne jd mcm awal thn lps..hahaha!!

Pol 'n' Hologram said...

Salam pak.. X x x ! Kali dh xde yg fail, btol x? Kate MAS syarep yg ajar, mane nk fail.. Kali ni 63% plak.. Meningkat la tu kan? Alhamdulillah

-HOLOGRAM

Anonymous said...

Salam.

I will continue this story once I get a good storyline. Please be patient :P

mas syarep said...

pergh!!bagus ar hologram..
ni yg bangga ni..
tu br skit tu..
klo terlebih..lpsni jd pembantu makmal gak ar..hahaha!!

bagus2!!lpsni bg naik lg..k!!

n..sempat plak time2 exam ni usha blog ek?mmg power la lu..!!

Nurfatmah Nabilah Kamarulzaman said...

salam... naz! dah hbis preksa.. update lah.. nk ziarah bace... :]

Pol 'n' Hologram said...

Salam Mas.. Sorry lambat reply comment mas! Baru balik Kem la dikatekan.. Knape Mas dtang kem skjap je? Lawat la kiteorg lame2 sket.. Then datang bkn nk bawak makanan.. Paham2 jela kem xckup makan.. Cukup tu cukup la, tp xbrape nk ***** = Lu pike la sndiri.. Yeay! Nanti kite same2 jadi pembantu makmal.. Nantikan.. Mas Syarep + Nazran = Mas Nazran, haha!

Pol 'n' Hologram said...

W'salam fatmah.. Nanti2 dulu la.. Penat sket ni.. Otak pon lembab sket ni.. Petang ni kot update, rase2nye la

Anonymous said...

when i read ths story...
fuhh~~ masakan saya mau puji. nnt penulisnya kembang!! haha!!

sarep pn komen? waah~~
besh3...

erm..based on the cmmnt,,

the insurmountable challenge will make u being a matured person :) so continue ur life as a matured person yarh..!

Being matured is when u could seperate ur pro and contra, so that u might be able to thnk positively. always rmember "priority"!!
always thnk of impacts of wut u r doing.. :)

iman itu naik dan turun..yet, it is a graph!! :) proactive and reformation make u being a perfect person..gud luck!!

assalam visiting..lalala~~

Pol 'n' Hologram said...

Salam.. Eyh2! Powernye bi die malam ni! Power power dan sangat power! Mantap sekali.. Ok2! Thanks for your comment.. Priority first! First thing come first..